Saturday, October 18, 2014

Writing 101, Saturday

Oct. 18

Introductions and name exercises:  finish
Midterm catch-up
Common errors
Finish ppt in preparation for midterm for next Sat.
How to do a peermark (handout—group exercise)

Sentences we worked on in class:




There are many ways in which television has changed.
An analysis of how the media portrays the races in America shows that it has changed significantly in the past twenty years.
In the past twenty years race issues in America have improved drastically.



The need to aggress and violence is also a delicate portrayal in advertising just as it was in the past.
There is still the need to appeal to affiliation and nurture being the main targets of need to capture viewers.
Still, the main targets to capture viewers are the appeal of affiliation and the need to nurture.
The affiliation and nurture appeals are still the main target to capture viewers.




People mind’s   
People’s minds


An analysis on American television showed that races have been portrayed different in comparison to twenty years ago.
An analysis of racial roles on American television shows have changed drastically over twenty years.

An analysis shows increased racial portrayal on TV in the past twenty years.
Television media portrayals of American racial roles have changed significantly over twenty years.
American racial roles on television have changed significantly over twenty years.

An analysis of TV shows an evolution of racial portrayals over twenty years.